I love this, especially the sketch of the lettering. That's astounding. Few things: I think the silhouette of the bear could be a bit more dynamic, the birds on the right look like specks, and "brewed" is typo'd. I agree with that the shades of green under Ale don't really work with the rest of the label because they seem so desaturated.
oh dear friend i can't express how i love your work as a one who love calligraphy so much i find your work so much better than alot of calligraphers i knew that you have a unique style, strong and awesome. god bless you.